Looking for Tips, and Opinions

[Pajoli]

So... iv'e been making agma.io edits on my youtube channel, for about a month now. In my opinion, they are good but they could use some work. To get a better insight on what others think of them, I would love it some of you could check out this video and reply with a rating 1-10, While also giving me tips on how I could improve! As always, thank you (if you did) for taking the time out of your day, to give me some tips, i really appreciate it! Thanks a bunch! -Pajoli

The video I'd like you to rate: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rI875WKqekY

Thank you!